This poem is really good--although it is kind of sad. I like how a lot of the lines only had one word because it gives the reader a chance to comes up with their own thoughts. Just wondering, why is "Death" capitalized in the end?
This is really good but like Angela and Lian said, it's kindof depressing. The way you had only a few words per line, gave it a nice flow and like Lian said, it gave the readers a lot to think about. Your blog is really cool too Porter. :)
This is a good poem but yet depressing. Does the title, atomic, mean atomic bomb?
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ReplyDeleteThis poem is really good--although it is kind of sad. I like how a lot of the lines only had one word because it gives the reader a chance to comes up with their own thoughts. Just wondering, why is "Death" capitalized in the end?
ReplyDeleteThis is really good but like Angela and Lian said, it's kindof depressing. The way you had only a few words per line, gave it a nice flow and like Lian said, it gave the readers a lot to think about. Your blog is really cool too Porter. :)
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